QUITE A FEW of the poems in Never seem comparable to the poems in the first half of Hybrids of Plants and Ghosts in that Graham is outdoors, seemingly by herself, near woods or water, noticing as much as she can, especially birds and trees. But this time around, the Wordsworthian Graham is the plural Graham, not just the speaking subject noticing and writing things down, but also noticing her own noticing and scrutinizing what she writes down, and wondering what it means that she is noticing her own noticing.
(By the way, is "In/Silence" a rewriting of Shelley's "Skylark"?)
Being plural also affects those poems that approximate prayer. Graham had already written a few of these, and more were coming--there are six poems titled "Praying" in the next book, Overlord. But the praying-subject has as many hovering ghost-selves as the speaking-subject. "Via Negativa" sounds like a prayer, but one that undermines the grounds of prayer in the very act of praying. It begins:
Gracious will. Gracious indistinct.
Everything depends on the point where nothing can be said.
From there we deduce how
from now on nothing will be like.
The person praying is already several persons, and the being to whom the person prays seems to be one of whom nothing can be asserted, nothing known.
what is this (erasure) (read on) it is a warning:
omit me: go back out: go back in: say:
no way to go in: go in: measure:
this little fabric vanishes, ascends, descends, vanishes [...]
And then the poem ends with four statements in parentheses.
Graham's theology, I am guessing, could be described as apophatic--that is, mainly based on negation, on what cannot be said, asserted, named. That puts her, as an artist whose main medium is words, in a particularly interesting position, as words tend to say, assert, and name.
I am trying to get at why "The Taken-Down God" is, for me, the book's high point. Graham is in a small church in Italy on Easter Saturday. Apparently, this congregation has an Easter tradition of taking its sculpture of Jesus down from cross on the wall on Friday, covering it with cloth on Saturday, then raising it back onto the wall on Sunday.
Graham is watching all this, an observer but not exactly a participant...or is she a participant? Is everyone there a participant? She knows she is not supposed to be taking notes while this local tradition is enacted, so she goes outside.
You are not supposed to write in the presence so I can't really do
this task [for us] in there [feel fear when I feel for my pen] [in pocket] [I have
come outside, sit on the steps, people watching me as they
go in] [remember]:
Like a quantum physicist, Graham understands that her observation of what happens becomes part of what happens. She does not share the faith of the other participants, perhaps; but as for that, what do we know what their faith is? She notes certain homely, matter of fact details, like the holes in the wall where the sculpture of Jesus will eventually be reattached; but she also seems genuinely affected. Another not-prayer is not-said ("a voice will say 'Father'--but, no; there is nothing: the / voice will say father meaning by that nothing") but Jesus will rise again--right back up on that wall, and you yourself will be turning the screwdriver that reattaches him.
