CAMILLE RALPHS IS the first woman to be poetry editor at the TLS, which is impressive all by itself, and she is only thirty-three, which is even more remarkable. This is her first collection, published in 2024 by Faber in England and this year by McSweeney's in the USA. I picked it up by because of a favorable review by Ange Mlinko--I'm something of a Pavlovian dog whenever Mlinko or Stephanie Burt praises a poet, slobbering all over the keyboard as I look online for a copy of the book. I think I scored this one through Open Books in Seattle.
The normal approach for a debut collection is "these are the best poems I have so far," but After You Were, I Am is a good deal more thematized and focused than that, with its three sections all orbiting the idea of the religious or the spiritual. The book is actually a bit darker and less vaporous than the phrase "the religious or the spiritual" suggests, but that's the best I can do.
The first section remodels and rewires eighteen prayers, mostly Christian and mostly ancient (none post-date George Herbert), somewhat in the way Alexander Pope rewired Horace or Ezra Pound rewired Propertius, with saltings of contemporary vocabulary, contemporary references, and contemporary anxieties. Kyrie Eleison morphs into: "True plutocrat and understrapper, / sugar daddy, spirit rapper, / organ donor, entity-- / O world, have mercy on me." Too audacious to be adopted by anyone's meditation retreat, I imagine, but authentic. You hear the satire and the longing at the same time.
The second section is a series of dramatic monologues from an historical and disastrous witch trial in 17th century Lancashire. Most of the women we hear from were found guilty of witchcraft and put to death, and Ralphs's collective portrait of them, among its other virtues, makes a powerful case for the separation of church and state.
Finally, we have "My Word: From the Spiritual Diary of Dr. Dee." John Dee was astrologer to Queen Elizabeth I, and Ralphs's dramatic monologues in his voice evoke the last moment before religion and science go through their messy divorce. Besides his astrological pursuits, Dee studies alchemy and searches for traces of the original, unfallen, Adamic language, in which the phenomenon and its name would be fused in an integral whole--the goal of a good deal of poetry, as Charles Taylor has explained.
Ralphs's "Note on Spelling" at the end of the book might be worth reading *before* you read the book. It's not just an archaizing mannerism, á la Spenser or Chatterton, but more of a Finnegans Wake strategy, getting the word to reveal its many mycelial connections.
